Persuasive+Writing

My class is learning how to persude people in a writing form. Here is some of my Work:

__This is my first peices of persuasive writing__

__Superman is the best super hero__

Superman is the best super hero because he can fly, he has super strength and has super laser vision. Superman has faced a lot of super villains and has always won with no loss. Whenever Superman is in trouble he always gets out of it he even won after facing kryptonite which makes him weak and lose all his powers.

Superman is better than Batman because he has super power and Batman doesn’t. Superman is better than Spiderman because he doesn’t try to kill anyone. Superman is better than Mr Fantastic because he doesn’t forget about everything tyring to save the world or create a project. Superman is better than the HULK because he doesn’t get angry and out of control.

Has Superman ever lost a battle NO, Has Superman ever given up when losing NO, isn’t Superman the leader of the Justice league so Superman is the best super hero.

Superman is the best because I he is made out of steel and when he got shot in the eye he did not die and the bullet was crushed. Super man has saved too much people to count. Superman faster and stronger than all of the other super heroes. So that’s why superman is the best super hero.

Refection: My strong parts in this piece of writing is that i keep refering to my point/ main idea

__Ski Trip Letter__

__This is my second peices of persuasive writing__

__Dear Parents or Caregivers__

Have you ever imagined what it would be like to ski the fluffy and frothy snow or even be touching clouds. The skiing trip is what we have all been waiting for and it is finally here. We are going to tell you why we should go to the skiing trip and what we will learn there, and what we need is your permission.

This term Room 17 and Room 2 are going on a ski trip to Mt Ruapehu. We will be using a variety of skills within managing self, relating to others and challenging yourself. We will be organising the trip with a variety of skills and did I mention we will be SKIING!!!

The skills we will be using within relating to others, managing self and challenging yourself are communicating with others effectively, earn each others trust and respect. We need to be open to new ideas and new ways of learning, active listen to discussions; we must respect each others ideas and be ready for any challenge that comes our way. There is also a lot more which we will be demonstrating on the ski trip.

__Goals:__
 * 1) To back up my ideas
 * 2) Reserch my ideas

__This is my third peices of persuasive writing__ ** Why police officers should be armed ** ** Police officers should be armed because when teenagers or adults go on a rampage the police force should be prepared. Police officers should also be armed because if someone has a weapon and comes out of nowhere the police officers should have protection. Police officers should be armed because if they are not arm they are not a much off a threat to people who are armed or they are unprepared for any sudden action. Just think if the police officers that their jobs is to make people to follow the law and to save people form harm but if they are not arm then what are we going to do if you are in danger and your so call protectors the police are not armed they too are in threat. If police officers were armed you would feel safe more secur e** In America the past five years about 156 deaths have been linked to the use of stun guns if that is the rate with armed officers imagine if what it would be with unarmed officers. New Zealand has had a proud tradition of having an unarmed police force and it is a tradition that would be good to uphold but on the other hand we need to be ready and prepared for any sudden attack. Police face violent situations so we need to be ready. We have come out on the upper hand all those times but we might not be able to survive much more so we NEED the police force to be armed. They are trying to get the NZ police to use tasers. Tasers are proven to send a shock though their whole body. If the NZ police do get tasers for a weapon then the police officers are armed and the citizens should feel more safe and secure. For the past two years both the commissioner and the minister have insisted that the decision on Tasers was a decision solely for the commissioner. A taser is an electroshock weapon that can stun a targeted subject from a distance by firing electrodes on the end of long thin wires. A taser can have a result to a serious injury or even death. Tasers are a safe object but can be very deadly. Tasers are considered as prohibited weapons by the Firearms Act in Canada and can only be used by members of law enforcement agencies after they are imported into the country under a special permit. New Zealand police can still claim to be among the few left in the world not openly armed. The infant mortality rate was 5.3 deaths per 1,000 live births in NZ and image how much of them were caused by murder. What happened if it is a life or death situation and you have a police officer but he is unarmed and the back up police will take to long to get there and the person is holding a gun? Or if it was the same situation but the officer is armed with a gun or a taser? What situation would you rather be in? So that’s why the NZ police should be armed.