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__Persuasive writing

Parent Comment__ The website is bright and colourful - however I found it distracting that you could not read the articles on one page but had to scroll back and forth all the time. The article about Superman was well written - but I did find that some of the arguments presented had some flaws (which, with a bit of further research may have been realised). For example, I do not recall Spiderman killing anyone (except in the movie versions). Also, I feel that the article needs a conclusion or summary rounding up all the ideas presented in the preceding paragraphs. The article about the skiing quickly drew you into an imagery of snow and clouds - which is what it is like on a fine day! I am looking forward to the trip - and hope that skills will be developed. Well done Damian in putting this site together - you can show me how it is done at home!